Wednesday 3 June 2020

powerful paragraph lost


For a few days we have been learning about 
similes and metaphors.We have a photo to describe and think deeply about it.







                                                                                     
                                                                                   As I walked through the forest the trees creaked                                                                                       and ruselled the ground is as wet as a wet                                                                                                 sponge. The trees are horizontal and mouldy.As                                                                                        I felt the air and  swayed my cold arms I felt                                                                                           relaxed.  
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 June 2020 at 11:46

    Hi Dallas I really like your paragraph keep up the good work from Liam chirp

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  2. Anonymous5 June 2020 at 11:49

    Hi Dallas,
    Great blog post. You explained what you did and I really enjoyed reading your powerful paragraph.

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  3. Anonymous11 June 2020 at 14:12

    Hi Dallas i like how you did your powerful paragraph post. I really liked reading your blog Dallas keep the work up Dallas never give up just keep working.

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